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I've got that Milton Pacheco kind of feeling


just something I came up while doing nothing (:

it might get scrapped so there u go :B

Critiques


:icontronixgfx:
This is a decent abstract but not great. Mostly its full of paint splatters and paint strokes, but however its just executed enough to be ok to look at.

The colour choices are sweet, the red and black give the nice traditional look I find. However those 1 pixel lines I find don't go with the piece, doesn't exactly fit with it if you ask me.

The top part is just too empty to look at as well. Nothing interesting to look up there, but I can see the bottom is appealing enough to look at but you could of add more detail to it like maybe add some interesting character or 3d abstract in the middle.

Overall the idea, colours and concept is good in this piece, however I guess you can say its not quite finished yet, just add more details and an interesting focal point and this can turn out to be a great piece, its not a bad piece just needs more to it is all. Keep up the good work:).
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:iconmartinolli:
no mames... eres una liana wey yo lo vi antes XD

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:icondownedzephyr:
aside from the text (which i feel looks odd), this is a piece of art that i would definitely hang up in my room.

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:iconmitsui04:
the black ant eats the red ant!

ta bueno. p a c h e c h o


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:iconsheriksillo:
dejamaciado bueno we :P

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:iconcacochia:
encabronadamente chingón...





:nod:

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:iconhavoc-lp:
hm la textura del fondo se ve algo clonada, como esas texturas que hacen los filtros del ps.

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:iconangelus-hellion:
es d filtro d ps (:

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:iconmt-y:
I disagree with Tronix ;)
I feel that it was made to look how it is, meaning the paint splatters and streaks were done purposefully, and I appreciate them

Great piece all in all, definitely nice red color
:D
:+fav:

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:iconmornothly:
I really, really like this man,

nice job :D

But I don't really think the text works in this one :)

:+fav:

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